《The Admirable》SectionⅥ PPT

《The Admirable》SectionⅥ PPT

第一部分内容：概要

本单元的写作项目属于新课标中记叙文体类别中的概要。概要是对一篇文章的主题思想的简单陈述，它用最简洁的语言概括了原文的主题，使读者对一篇文章有一个简要概括的了解。概要主要包括总结原文的主要观点、主要支撑细节、总体性评价。

Ⅰ.Pre-writing

(Ⅰ)Learn to write after the model

On 7 December, 2015, Tu Youyou was awarded a Nobel Prize for her discovery of artemisinin, a life-saving drug for malaria.

Tu Youyou majored in medicine in university and later studied Chinese medicine with experts in the field.

In 1969, Tu Youyou was given the mission to set up a team to find a cure for malaria.When worldwide scientists failed to find a cure using modern chemicals, Tu Youyou turned to Chinese herbs for help.Despite their limited resources and hundreds of failed experiments, they found a possible chemical.In order to test the medicine, Tu Youyou and her team tested the medicine on their own bodies.They finally discovered the most effective drug to cure the disease.

Although Tu Youyou has won the Nobel Prize and become well-known, she is uninterested in fame and prefers to continue her research.

(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—Words and phrases

①________________ n．发现

②________________ n.  概要；摘要 

③________________ n.  队；组

④________________ adj.  吸引人的

⑤________________ n.  进步

⑥________________ n.  研究

⑦________________ adj.  好相处的

⑧________________  主修

⑨________________  毕业于

⑩________________  对……有天赋

⑪________________  努力做

⑫________________  更喜欢， 宁愿

⑬__________________  给某人树立一个好榜样

⑭________________  被认为/看作是……

⑮________________  作为……而被铭记

Ⅱ.While-writing

Write a summary of the text “ The Superhero Behind Superman ”．

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加连接词，以使行文连贯。

Step 1　List the outline of the passage.

1．首段：________________________________________________________

2．中间段：______________________________________________________

3．尾段：________________________________________________________

Step 2　List the words，phrases and sentences.

1．Words and phrases

①________________ n．贡献

②________________ n.  尊敬

③________________ adj.  著名的

④________________ n.  成就；成绩

⑤________________  出生于

⑥________________  被认为是 

⑦_________________________  取得显著进步

⑧________________  献身于

⑨________________  高度评价

⑩________________  参加选拔

2．Sentences

①虽然他再也不能走路了，但里夫以尊严和勇气开始了他的新生活。(让步状语从句)

②里夫解释说，尽管他可能激励了数百万人，“我所做的是基于我们内心的力量……你不需要成为‘超人’才能做到这一点。” (宾语从句；主语从句)

Step 3　Draft the article by using the following words.

and, from then on, unfortunately, although，shortly after, but

Christopher Reeve not only played a superhero in many of the Superman films, but he was also a superhero to many in real life.

Reeve acted in his first school play at the age of eight.As an actor, he tried out for, and starred in four Superman films from 1978 to 1987.From then on, he became a world-famous actor.

Unfortunately, a terrible thing happened in 1995.Reeve was thrown from a horse and broke his neck.At first, doctors did not expect him to live.However, “Superman” didn’t give up.Although he could never walk again, Reeve began his new life with dignity and courage.Shortly after his accident, Reeve returned to filmmaking.Over the next few years, he devoted himself to helping those in need.

Christopher Reeve died on 10 October, 2004.But he will always be regarded as a superhero—in more ways than one.

Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishing the passage

Exchange your passage with your partner，and pay attention to the following points.

□1.Is the format of the summary appropriate?

□2.Are there any spelling mistakes?

□3.Are there any grammatical mistakes like the tenses(时态)?

□4.Does the summary include all the main contents?

□5.Is written English correctly used?

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The Admirable PPT，第二部分内容：亮点表达

精彩开头语

Yao Ming is a great basketball player in China or even in the world.

姚明是中国乃至世界上伟大的篮球运动员。

Martin Luther King is now regarded as one of the heroes of the 20th century.

马丁·路德·金现在被认为是20世纪的英雄之一。

Einstein, who discovered the“Relativity Theory”， is well known in the world.

爱因斯坦发现了“相对论”是众所周知的。

Howard Carter is one of the most famous explorers that the world has ever known.

霍华德·卡特是世界上最著名的探险家之一。

Shakespeare, who was a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.

莎士比亚出身贫寒，几乎没有受过什么教育，他写的戏剧和诗歌在全世界都有人读。

Tomas Edison, born in America, was a great scientist and inventor.

托马斯·爱迪生生于美国，是一位伟大的科学家和发明家。

精华结尾语

Sb still live in one’s heart. 某人仍然活在……心里。

Sb set a good example to...某人为……树立了好榜样。

Sb be respected by...某人受到……的尊重。

Sb be honored as...某人被尊为……

Sb be regarded/accepted as...某人被认为/接受为……

Sb become a world champion at...某人在……成为世界冠军。

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The Admirable PPT，第三部分内容：写作技巧

1．文体要求

概要应该只有原文的三分之一或四分之一长；概要应全部用自己的话完成，不要引用原文的句子；概要必须全面、清晰地表明原文所载的信息，以便你的读者不需翻阅原文就可以完全掌握材料的原意。

2．行文要求

删除细节，只保留主要观点；把长段的描述变成复合句；避免重复：在原文中，为了强调某个主题，可能会重复论证说明。但是这在概要中应该删除那些突出强调的重述句；文章中的第一人称说的话通常在概要中转换成第三人称。 

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